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So, most recently, I've had more luck with tweaking earlier parts of the story than moving it forward, but here's a bit more progress.

Parasites,' Rin answered. 'Creep loves putting bugs in people and taking control of them.Collapse )
I thought Chapter 6 was going to hold this entire fight sequence. But, I don't think that's going to work out. Ah well. Outlines are made to be tweaked.

Shiro leapt clear of the shifting, crumbling earth, drawing his gun from the concealing drape of his cassock as he did so.Collapse )

Split WiP Chapter 2 Changes

Sorry for the absence here. After a brief, brutal fight with cancer, I've lost my oldest supporter, proofreader, and constant source of encouragement. Getting back in the groove of... anything hasn't been easy.

But, here's a brief snippet proposing a re-write of a scene from chapter 2 from Mephisto's PoV.

Mephisto smirked to himself at the open hunger in the boy’s face.Collapse )
Yes! Finally knocked out this scene and, I think, this chapter. I had wanted Shiro and Yukio to have a heart to heart because Rin seemed to be getting all the father-son talks. But, instead, they wanted to have this wordless, companionable understanding going on.

Is that any way to talk to your father? / Only when it's true.Collapse )
Grah, an ongoing illness in the family has my writing schedule all off. But, this scene is moving, if slowly.

There were so many other things he wanted to be doing.Collapse )

Split WiP Chapter 5: In Which Yukio Tries

Words are coming slowly due to various IRL issues, but I keep plugging away.

But, he would not accept losing Rin while he was still alive.Collapse )